Story...

[DethFan666]

I am in the midst of writing a story and i was wondering whether or not you guys would like me to post it on to here and allow you to critize my horrible work.
Please let me know what you think through posts or emails to asuka_makabe@hotmail.com, please no spam.

For bidaily updates of the story, add me on myspace(myspace.com/asuka_ninja) where i will post each part of the story as i finish it. Please forgive any tardiness to post in blogs there as i might not get much done some days.

Just as well, i am also looking for names for my story. If you would like your name to appear throughout, email me with it in subject line. I will fit as many as I can into the context.

[kittytoki]

a story, eh? i'd be up for reading it xD havnt read somethin' in a while..

but, believe me, not even reading the story yet, i'd bet it's 100x better than any crap i'd write.

[Melody]

Story? :O what kinda story!

I wanna read~!

[DethFan666]

i forgot to say in the first one(cuz i didnt think it would matter since we all watch metalocalypse) but i would like to apologize for any obscure or grotesque content ahead of time

Edit: i would like to also say that i probably wont get much done today so i posted the first part already up as a blog on myspace...This is just a rough draft, full post will take the place of all the old ones when i finish and if there is no text limit here i will post here as well
Link is:
http://blog.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=blog.view&friendID=71188450&blogID=358664468

[Melody]

I like it so far x] It's not bad at all, very descriptive but not to the point that it's boring or somethin'...nice work~!

[DethFan666]

Thank you, i appreciate it.
I dont know how much ill get done today(i was gunna work all day but im watching a movie now) but ill probably have another part up by wednesday for sure.

[DethFan666]

Part 2 will be posted soon, it isnt as detailed as part one but its basically an informative chapter...Part 3 will be back to the gruesome details of death and decay.

[DethFan666]

Parts 1-3 are up on my myspace(http://myspace.com/asuka_ninja)...

Part 3 is my least favorite cuz i couldnt fit good amounts of gore into it like i wanted, but its there...add me if you want while your there

[DethFan666]

Almost finished with this beast of a story...parts 1-4 of the total 5 that i will make are up today...ill have this whole thing finished and re-spell/grammar checked by March 1st and post the whole thing up here then if anyone still hasnt read it.

[DethFan666]

guys...i cant post the full thing here

link to full thing

http://blog.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=blog.view&friendID=71188450&blogID=363557642

[DethFan666]

anyone read first story? if so and you liked it, im writing another more gorey story currently...will probably be longer than the first...